Well done for organising into suitable sections, Alice.
To improve: - go into more detail, especially with the complex tools and technology you used for editing stills and video. - following the previous point, add more screen shots (especially of Final Cut timeline etc) that show the complex effects being added. - Include more detailed reference to the web tools that you used (with images) such as IMDB etc. you could also talk about email communication, survey monkey, twitter and other social networking sites you might have used. - Make sure each strand clearly indicates the area you are focussing on (e.g. planning, research, construction or evaluation). I think you could do more about the web tools for evaluation.
Well done for organising into suitable sections, Alice.
ReplyDeleteTo improve:
- go into more detail, especially with the complex tools and technology you used for editing stills and video.
- following the previous point, add more screen shots (especially of Final Cut timeline etc) that show the complex effects being added.
- Include more detailed reference to the web tools that you used (with images) such as IMDB etc. you could also talk about email communication, survey monkey, twitter and other social networking sites you might have used.
- Make sure each strand clearly indicates the area you are focussing on (e.g. planning, research, construction or evaluation). I think you could do more about the web tools for evaluation.